When I look towards you a thought suddenly appears,
One day I’ll wait until the sky is clear,
Just as it was the day when we first met,
You will quietly return to my side to get
to see you in my heart the you in my soul.
As days go by, my feelings get stronger,
To be in your arms, I can’t wait any longer,
Look into my eyes and you will see it’s true,
Day and night my thoughts are for you…
Let the world stop turning, let the sun stop
burning,
Let them tell me love’s not worth going through,
If it all falls apart, I’ll know deep in my heart,
The only dream that mattered had come true,
In this life I loved you.
The composition is good apart from a couple of things here and there. Good work maintaining the appeal of the poem till the end.
ReplyDeleteThank you so much Amigo. I am glad you comprehended my concept.I would like to know more about what you expect in my flow of writings.
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